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i remember
Contributed by
spider
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:49:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Smiling mouths,
Crying eyes,
Bravest faces,
Last goodbyes.
Something's missing,
From my life.
Where you once were,
Only pain and strife.
Come back to me,
And fill the void.
Come back to me,
I feel destroyed.
Copyright ©
spider
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2004-03-11 15:49:41]
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Re: i remember
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by Remy on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:54:06 PM AEST
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sounds like the precursor to a japanese-american action film... lol, don't ask!! good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: i remember
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by gery_giggles on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:50:26 PM AEST
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ohhh!..i could draw a picture with this!..its really good..i likes!..stay strong!
luv always |
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Re: i remember
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:05:44 PM AEST
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| very nice write .. But yet very sad hope you two can work things out. best of luck to you both......Love AnGel |
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