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Luke
Contributed by
remy
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:00:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you want for better and i can only give so much
the best of now is i'm feeling out of touch
yet such a setting could be room for an advance
you take the chance... you do that little dance
common interest ties us through these years
common difference drives me off amidst the tears
while i fear for worse you go for better still
taking the kill... rearranging the daunting hill
how do you do it?
i've taken nothing...
at once, you'll go
for more, suppose
regroup, you know
what we need...
so much more than a feed
you made your point while this time i've found
it's so much safer to lay quiet in the background
the sound of silence is what i've wanted to hear
or so it appears... to allay all of my fears
i'm over here with a pocketful of rejections
amount them up and you'll see a new collection
there's no question of what i want to face
a measure of grace... it quickens the pace
how do you do it?
i've broken nothing...
at once, i'll go
for less, suppose
recoup, you know
what i need...
so much more than a feed
stepping back with an air of silence to hold
careful slow i'll chance it to move so bold
i've been told so little of what to really do
not like i knew... but then again i chose to
it's my choice to settle upon my own actions
it's my voice and not a mechanical reaction
whatever happens you can bet that i'm nearby
don't even ask why... you don't have to try
how do you do it?
i've mentioned nothing...
at once, we'll go
for some, suppose
review, you know
what you need...
so much more than a feed
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-03-11 15:00:11]
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Re: Luke
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:10:19 PM AEST
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this is REALLY good!!... hope he reads it :)
Dani
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Re: Luke
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:07:15 PM AEST
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Impressive . . . most impressive.
I second Ms. Violin. |
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Re: Luke
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:58:21 PM AEST
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| WOW! This is a good write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Luke
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by Remi on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:45:40 AM AEST
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Well who told u. u could take my name LOL but anyways this a nice write well hope he read as well
remi |
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Re: Luke
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:45:39 AM AEST
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| well done... :) :) :) |
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