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_Postponed~Surgery_

Contributed by Syk0hsGirL on Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 12:28:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Heart beating fast, tears falling down
Nurse steps out with quite a frown
She speaks about money and finances
She waits for her answer with evil glances
Women around with men's arms to hold
The girl just froze, for she's alone
She gets up with the nurse to go with her
Everything at that moment was just a blur
Nurse sits her down and says 2 Thousand please
Your Bill isn't paid, And this we need
She told the nurse she was internally bleeding
But the nurse said sorry it's money were needing
She called her family to see what to do
Her mother said "God it's your job you'll lose"
If you go with another doctor it's your job you'll lose!
She asked her mom is that all you can think about?
And on the phone her mom did shout
She hung up the phone, rejected her surgery date
So the bills would be better, then she felt hate
The girl drove home in tears and pain
Nobody around, she asked herself what does living gain?
She's offered her home, Money, Love, and Life
And still can't seem to do anything right
She stepped on the peddle and drove real fast
Hoping this would be her end, her very last
But she made it home where she sits in her chair
In a dark black room, nobody to care....
Her mom tried to call, but the phone lay dead
She doesn't care...if she's alive or dead..

Copyright © Syk0hsGirL ... [ 2002-09-14 12:28:47]
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Re: _Postponed~Surgery_ (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 01:45:17 PM AEST
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This is extremely sad,but a good write.Well done and keep your head up....

DP

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