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Today, Tomorrow, Forever
Contributed by
mercedes
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Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:36:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Yesterday I treated you poorly
Words were said, feelings were hurt
I was selfish, angry, and inconsiderate
Treated you no better than dirt
Today I realize my mistake
I now know how much you mean to me
All the things you do and say
Shows me we were meant to be
Tomorrow I will do better
I will show you how much I care
For once I will put you first
Love you like a teddy bear
Forever I will be yours
If you promise to be mine
Never again will I take for granted
That which is greater than the sweetest wine
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2004-03-11 11:36:06]
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Re: Today, Tomorrow, Forever
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by Angelchild on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:42:14 AM AEST
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| This is really good. Keep it up! |
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Re: Today, Tomorrow, Forever
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:53:11 AM AEST
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| your poem touched my heart:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Today, Tomorrow, Forever
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:53:54 AM AEST
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sweet sweet apologies
well done
michelle |
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Re: Today, Tomorrow, Forever
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:56:42 AM AEST
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If you arent forgiven after that, the guy is a schmuck and doesnt deserve you! ;o)
Absolutely beautiful
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Today, Tomorrow, Forever
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by markie on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 07:54:20 AM AEST
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| Sounds good. Really good. |
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Re: Today, Tomorrow, Forever
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by mountainhigh on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 07:42:14 AM AEST
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| Ah to be a bug in the room the following day, promises made, promises kept. Gets the imagination roaming. Thanks for sharing, and jaring the memories. |
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