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flames of fire
Contributed by
bear8807
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Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:23:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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the darkness it will light
in the night it will ignite
lighting forests, charring grounds
needing oxygen not needing sounds
getting bigger the wind encourages it
the rain very slowly discourages it
we love it the brightness the flickering
it looks so harmless until were drawn close
seeing that wonderful light
wanting to touch the beutiful light
oh how it burns straight through your skin
boiling your blood and frying your bones
the light is alive needing fuel to survive
boiling over grounds can't burn through the stones
oh but how encanting these flames of fire
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2004-03-11 10:23:37]
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Re: flames of fire
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by Remy on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:31:40 PM AEST
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oh how i love thee, oh little pyro!! lol, joking. good writing, i love the surreal feeling of it... ;0)
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Re: flames of fire
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by arden on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:29:06 PM AEST
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this was awesome. really written well. good work keep it up.
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