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Suicides illusion
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:39:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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To be alone and so confined
Think of thoughts so malign
Determine where your essence kept
Dreaming though you never slept
In conscious mind you break away
From sanity you move astray
Winding down, internal roads
Carrying emotional loads
Your falling tears to scar your life
That final cut from illusions knife
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-03-11 07:39:15]
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Re: Suicides illusion
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by venkat on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:58:08 AM AEST
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| well wrapped..venkat |
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Re: Suicides illusion
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:24:43 AM AEST
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| excellent:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Suicides illusion
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:26:32 AM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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Re: Suicides illusion
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by arden on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:41:56 AM AEST
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short and very very good. i love this. nicely done.
Arden |
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Re: Suicides illusion
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:06:16 AM AEST
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This is my kind of write and I love how you did it. It doesnt always take a lot of words to express such deep thoughts as this proves.
Brilliantly written my friend
Larry |
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Re: Suicides illusion
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by bear8807 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:25:27 AM AEST
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nicely done i like it keep up the good work
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Re: Suicides illusion
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:29:03 PM AEST
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This poem is skillfully written, although I'm assuming you didn't take pains in writing this, as it has a mellifluous, yet direct quality to the thoughtstream, which I personally associate with spontaneous expression.
But if it was written painstakingly - congratulations - It was well worth the effort.
5 stars, regardless. |
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Re: Suicides illusion
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by eternityandaday4u on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:58:16 PM AEST
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| wow this is very well put. i guess sometimes it does only take a little bit of words to make a great impact on ones mind. i thought that it was awesome!!!! loved it! |
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