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For Love
Contributed by
uchendu
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Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:33:02 AM in AEST
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I live in the valley of rejection
I know I am going into extinction
I've been hacked by all and sundry
bringing this horror in my story
It was so sad a bumpy journey
hearts and homes closed against me
REFRAIN
All hearts closed against my face
There is much pain for me to overcome
that only through hope will love come
All I hear are the cracks of thunders
and it's breaking my mind's shutters
I can't feel the sun shine in my mind
this is why I am here a dying kind
REFRAIN
Ah a true real dying kind
CHORUS
Who will show me
who will show me
how will I fight for love
how will I fight for love
I wish I may giggle and laugh
not get bogged by feelings rough
why so much misery in my history
while others have a different story
I want to be like a light-hearted child
but I am carrying a heart really chilled
REFRAIN
It's stone cold and truly chilled
Maybe I wasn't meant to see sunshine
but love is my need not bread or wine
they keep saying the healing will come
but when it comes to love I need some
When'll I hear the murmurings of peace
will I hear it in this life without menace
REFRAIN
All over here all I sense is menace
CHORUS
Who will show me
who will show me
how will I fight for love
how will I fight for love
Copyright ©
uchendu
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2004-03-11 06:33:02]
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Re: For Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:42:30 AM AEST
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| This is such sweet n sad lyric, I have felt this way and still do today. It's good thing to read this. I can feel the rhythm and beat. I can feel Gene, I can hear it play in my head. It's me Nikkie |
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Re: For Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:48:03 AM AEST
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| I NEED TO READ MORE OF THIS UCHE, ALWAYS SEND ME UR WORKS ANYTIME U POST.. THIS IS ONE IS A WINNER, WISH I COULD GET ONE TO PUT IT INTO MUSIC, I JUST LOVE THE MESSAGE AND THE TALENT EXHIBITED BY YOUR BRAIN...CORELL |
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Re: For Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:52:17 AM AEST
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| This is sad search for love.. I can see not just love for fun, but care from people around. many people need this love, I need it lol, I need it, this is real lol, a cool song made to fit into its message and style.. send me more of this, I am Dreo in BP |
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Re: For Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:58:56 AM AEST
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| I voted 5 stars for this song.. it's a great work of art. Wendy |
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Re: For Love
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by EUGENE on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:04:33 AM AEST
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| I am not going to comment on the message here, but I just want to say that I await to read more comments from all here |
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Re: For Love
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by hidden_dezires on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:38:50 AM AEST
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| this is such a beautiful song, a bit sad but beautiful none the less, it is a song that people like myself can relate to in some way.. i love it ...i can almost hear it playing in my head ....its a great write .....HD |
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Re: For Love
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:17:15 PM AEST
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would love to here the music to this it is great
michelle |
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Re: For Love
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by uchendu on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:32:40 PM AEST
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THANK U.. THANK U...
I WANT TO JUST SAY THIS TO ALL OF YOU. I LOVE ALL YOU SAY TO ENCOURAGE ME, I LOVE THE VOTES YOU CAST, THEY GIVE ME A REFLECTION OF HOW U FEEL ABOUT MY PIECE... REALLY I JUST WANT TO PUT IT THIS WAY - I need your advices on how best to improve on my song-lyrics, this will be most appreciated. I love you all |
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Re: For Love
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:42:02 PM AEST
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i think this is wonderful, although i would change one thing on ending:
"When'll I hear the murmurings of peace
will I hear it in this life without menace"
to:
~When'll I hear the murmurings of peace
~oh, will I be within in this life's embrace?
or something, just my two cents, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: For Love
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by faithmairee on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:13:46 PM AEST
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what a beautiful, deep and sorrowful poem...i could feel your pain when i read this...who is there that couldn't relate to your poem in some way...this was so well written...my heart goes out to you
faith |
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Re: For Love
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by desire on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:46:39 PM AEST
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| this my friend is a very deep poem and who ever inspired it will be proud to know a beautiful song was written i gave it a 5 i love every thing about it ..it is among my favorites that you have done..simply beautiful..i cant wait to hear the lyrics play..i love it ...you are as always amazing....slr |
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Re: For Love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:57:17 PM AEST
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Very good, my friend. U r definently a big hit over here on this site. I'm really proud of you and your amazing lyrics.
Great job!
luv, huggs,
emy
Thank u so much for your comments and support of my work. |
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Re: For Love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:23:56 PM AEST
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Well my dear friend,
this is a hit ssong.
A bit sad but it beautifully written.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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