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Thread of Life
Contributed by
MissAnneThropy
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Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 12:22:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I watch the storm approaching
the darkness calls my name
the trees are growing restless
they feel the season change
their fruit has putrified
forbidden once and bound to die
the thread of life lies severed
on the brink of paradise.
Copyright ©
MissAnneThropy
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2002-09-14 12:22:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Thread of Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lia on
Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 02:32:36 PM AEST (User
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For such a short poem..sure does have a lot of 'punch' behind it... |
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Re: Thread of Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 03:11:19 PM AEST (User
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Great metaphors....lovely write.... WElcome to ypdc..
Jenni |
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