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Please stop.....

Contributed by Cobalt on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:25:03 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Tears run down my face
as blood freely flows.
I miss the touch
that would comfort me.
I miss my shoulder to cry on
and the arms that would hold me.
I hate that I am left alone
again and again.
I hate the failure from myself
and from those around me.
I can not stand the love
that I see in their eyes.
I feel sick by the truth
that suffocates me.
I am not that special.
I am not that important.
You can not keep
leaning on me.
I am going to break.
I hate you
and myself for it.
I allow it because
you need it.
Why will none of you see
that I am dying and that
you are the ones killing me.
Why will you not just let me
cry for this once.
I need it and I am begging.
I am down on my knees
but still none of you see.
I need the comfort this time.
Why can I not keep anything?
Why does everyone leave me?
I have to go now.
I have to run.
I can not stay here.
I am bleeding inside.
I am dying.
Just let me go.
Let me die in peace.
Let me off of this life support.
I can not be there anymore.
I am gone.
Dead inside and I can not
be reborn.
This pain is too much.
Can not be taken any longer.
The knife or the road
and I am beyond caring.
So please
just let me go.
Say goodbye and hug me
one last time.
Everyone has failed me
and I have done the worst.
I am leaving
so pretend I am dead.
Do not track me down.
Just a ghost anymore.
Sorry I must go now.


Raven's Sin




Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-03-11 01:25:03]
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Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:33:29 AM AEST
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It's very powerful poem good job.
Kinda wonder if your talking about yourself?


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:35:40 AM AEST
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wwooo this is nuthing but sad but very well said.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:51:44 AM AEST
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Don't try to understand...but it makes me feel like wanting to run away...hide and never come back. I don't want to be near such pain...I feel it myself and must flee.


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 02:36:14 AM AEST
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a very sad poem. Just keep loking you WILL find some1 who can heal you, some1 who you can count on to be there for you and when you find them all you have to do is wait, wait to get to know them and for them to know you. It may take along time and you may feel like there is no point but without the journey there is no destination.....


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 02:44:19 AM AEST
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Very emotional..and powerful..I feel really sad after reading this..venkat


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:19:47 AM AEST
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Very powerful poem, it went straight to my heart and I feel really melancholic now. Well done.


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:30:58 AM AEST
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wow! Been there, am there. I think we all have a purpose in life and some of us are made to be used and abused. Your expression was very well put. The sentiment hit home,as it should.


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:09:53 AM AEST
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very sad, very good expression though
*hugs*



Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:37:49 AM AEST
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This was so sad it just broke my heart. You have expressed so much deep pain and if I could erase all of it I would. I don't know what to say except that I am deeply moved by this. ((Hugs)) Do not give up! You make think you are dead but I see enormous life inside of you, I do. Kie


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:38:31 PM AEST
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very raw jeff makes me want to give you that last hug such range in emotions you touch them all

michelle


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saitou-sama on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:10:37 PM AEST
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It makes me feel like crying. ::hugs::


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:45:50 AM AEST
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very sad i got not even half way and tear's started flowing down my face...nice write though....Hang in there.......TC.........Love AnGel


Re: Please stop..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 08:50:03 AM AEST
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Powerful and telling. Interesting write.
Stitch




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