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Little Bird
Contributed by
thumper
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Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:49:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Little bird
amongst the rest
Dressed in raiment
unlike the others
Elusive moves
this dance she dances
Always just apart
and beyond
Thier grasp
of her uniqueness
What wind driven way
this birdie's come
Struggling all the way
lost and floundering
Seeking a place
that is elusive
Never here,
Never there.
Just beyond
her grasp.
Seeking ever.
Finding never.
Copyright ©
thumper
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2004-03-11 00:49:20]
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Re: Little Bird
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:15:12 AM AEST
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This is a charming write. You manage to portray a clear picture (a robin for me, personally) of a bird in confused emigration and corellate it with a sense of futility.
Vividly done. |
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Re: Little Bird
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:00:11 AM AEST
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I think this little bird is very strong inside, and will one day find her place in life ;o)
Outstanding write with great depth.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Little Bird
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by venkat on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:41:31 AM AEST
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| Awww..simply charming..what a sweet poem..I agree with Rakerman.. there is some cute depth also..venkat |
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Re: Little Bird
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:28:53 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful, i love your mind and poetry ive read so far, this one can be taken several ways, the uniqeness of ones own self should never fly with the rest but always strive to be an individual:) hugs n' love nessa
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