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Drowning Wound
Contributed by
desireemiote
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:58:45 PM in AEST
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Lost it
If ever really there
Gone
Washed out
Dirty
Not clean of it
The blood stain
None see
In plain sight
Written all over face
None read
Short mourning
By few others
Then moved on
A sharp cruelty
Not spared
From this time
A stab
Gutting the yet open wound
Life pouring out
Spilling to drown
Where lieing
Copyright ©
desireemiote
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2004-03-10 23:58:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Drowning Wound
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:07:09 PM AEST (User
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I love your ideas in this... reminded me of a lot of things, interesting write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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