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Silent Echo
Contributed by
thumper
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:29:51 PM in AEST
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The rift in my soul runs incredibly deep
The scars are too many, they won't let me sleep
For in giving my love and my total devotion
My man put his mouth and his fists into motion
He blackened my eyes and blew out my lips
And when he was done, tried to ply me with gifts
To say he was sorry for what he had done
I was his love, his only one
The abuse, it was there, it was ever ready
The hate that he spewed from his mouth was rock steady
It chipped and it picked away at my soul
In place of my heart is a huge gaping hole
Until one day, here I lie spirit broken
The door to trust never again to be open
Six foot under is where I crave to be
Never again to trust or love, not me
I'm no longer with him, we split long ago
The memory's still there in a silent echo
The pain is up front, it will never recede
Never again to enjoy life, no, not me!
Copyright ©
thumper
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Re: Silent Echo
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by EmersonV on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:50:15 AM AEST
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damn....that sounds like a pretty bad decade.
its good to know that he aint around anymore.
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Re: Silent Echo
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:18:04 AM AEST
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| pretty powerful poem. It sounds like a bad time, but I'm sure things are better now. |
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Re: Silent Echo
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by Bubbi-Gal on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:56:52 AM AEST
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| Im so sorry to hear you went through that, I hope things are better for you now, as you can write some really good poetry!! |
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Re: Silent Echo
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 02:42:09 AM AEST
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| I.can see you really suffered big time.I sometimes know how you feel i see alot of women go through this.I really feel for you .good write. |
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Re: Silent Echo
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:19:51 AM AEST
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| That sounds like a truly terrible thing to go through, and I'm sorry that you had to experience it. Glad to hear that you've gotten past the ordeal. |
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Re: Silent Echo
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by venkat on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:48:23 AM AEST
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| Ooooooh...what a powerful poem..seems to me you are a real jewel..with stood so much pain..heart touching..venkat |
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Re: Silent Echo
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:09:18 AM AEST
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awww, thumper this is so sad, *big hugs* beautifully written through tears and pain, you share a strength many women will see when this poem, with its important message, is seen, love nessa
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Re: Silent Echo
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by ozbtvs on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:39:51 AM AEST
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what can I say.
pretty powerful stuff, I was able to visualise it very clearly.
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