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Reign of Tears
Contributed by
desireemiote
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 10:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Squeezing
Suffocating
Breath
Stolen away
The wind whipping
Violent
There's no calm
Before this storm
The rain begins
To pelt
As tears
Running down the window
Pooling on the outdoor sill
The world outside
Is crying
Seen through tinted glass
Sheltered from
Unwillingly
Wishing to be enfolded
In the chill
Of wind and rain
Feel the cleansing
Making new
Drowning sorrow
With tears and darkness
Yet sitting inside
Kept from this rejoice
A longing torn soul
Staring while being swallowed
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Re: Reign of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 10:45:21 PM AEST
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"Staring while being swallowed."
Ahhhh yes. Awsome imagery!! I love this one. You paint such a vivid picture! |
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Re: Reign of Tears
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by Crimson_Rose on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:06:28 PM AEST
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| Wow, Very powerful. Great write! |
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Re: Reign of Tears
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by BigDaddy on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:20:18 PM AEST
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| Great poem, very descriptive!! I especially like the title, it's a very good fit!! Thanks |
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Re: Reign of Tears
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:42:58 PM AEST
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| I love the way you put it all into words. I like being in the rain,but not when it's lightening. Scares the be-jeebers outta me!! lol It was a very nice read. I enjoyed it and after all, isn't that what it's all about? |
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Re: Reign of Tears
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:55:00 PM AEST
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OOOO... so descriptive... loved it! great write!!
Love the title too! Keep it up...
~Donna~
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Re: Reign of Tears
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:40:09 AM AEST
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| Amazing write. Very emotional, your emotions penetrated right through me. |
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Re: Reign of Tears
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by Kie on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:33:59 AM AEST
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| You left me breathless with this poem. Awesome write. Kie |
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