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Passing Years
Contributed by
BigDaddy
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:43:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The Sun has set the day comes to end,
We hope and we dream the next one will send.
The feelings of gladness and exuberance glow,
What we hold dear to our heart may abundance flow.
Days give way to years as we continue our course,
We long anxiously yearning for each other's force.
A deep well of love and binding strength,
Do we not fortify our love each time and for length.
Years of endurance and long lasting yield,
Our love is a sword and our heart is its' shield.
We carry on with our lives hand in hand together,
The years still will pass God bless our love forever.
Copyright ©
BigDaddy
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2004-03-10 21:43:55]
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Re: Passing Years
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:51:29 PM AEST
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What a lovely God given gift you have. May the years continue to bless your love.
Rita |
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Re: Passing Years
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by Remy on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:13:54 PM AEST
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*thinking* if this is a piece on enduring love, it makes me wonder about your age... *grins* ... aww, so cute!! lol. beautiful write! ;0)
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Re: Passing Years
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by emystar on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 02:31:30 AM AEST
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As i keep saying, anotha masterpeice.
huggs,
emy |
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