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Man of Cliche
Contributed by
phildel
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Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 12:14:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Mr Cliche, love of my life,
Came out with lines,
That were twice as nice,
I took every word,
As so damn sincere,
Craved his attention,
Wanted him near.
It were as if,
He'd learnt every cheap line
Should've noticed the others,
Didn't give him the time,
To coil round their hearts,
With his soppy remarks
Now i'm left with his pic,
On my wall, full of darts.
Watch out for the men,
Recycling charms
That are all too well known,
They mean you much harm.
He seemed so loving,
And all I can say,
Is he was a cheating,
Punch-line repeating,
Foolish, Mr Cliche.
Copyright ©
phildel
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2002-09-14 12:14:11]
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Re: Man of Cliche
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 15th September 2002 @ 12:44:08 PM AEST
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Two of my ex-best friends are this (and I use the term losely) man! One of them (almost married, with two children) tried to take my love from me and the other (married with a lovely wife and new house) achieved it!
Well written Phildel try to avoid these lying, cheating, bas##rds in future! I will now I know what they sound like!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Man of Cliche
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by Phildel on
Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 12:57:30 AM AEST
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Thanks very much Dean for commenting. I'm so sorry to hear about your two bast**d ex-bestfriends, thats awful...
Phildel xx |
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