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FIRST COMMUNION
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:06:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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THE WETNESS OF YOUR MOUTH IS THE ELIXIR OF GOD
I TAKE COMMUNION BY DRINKING FROM YOUR LIPS- A SPIRITUAL AWAKENING
THIS IS THE DEFINING MOMENT OF MY LIFE
YOUR KISS HAS ASSAULTED MY SENSES-
I CANNOT FEEL MY LEGS AND I CANNOT TELL IF I EVEN TOUCH THE GROUND.
I HAVE NO SENSE OF TIME- DIRECTION- OR SPACE- I AM LOST IN THE GLEAM OF YOUR EYES- THE TASTE OF YOUR TOUNGE, THE SMELL OF YOUR SKIN- I AM OVERWHELMED AND IN AWE OF YOU.
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2004-03-10 21:06:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: FIRST COMMUNION
(User Rating: 1 ) by BigDaddy on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:31:31 PM AEST (User
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Wow, what a kiss!!! Very vivid and descriptive. I like the phrase, " your kiss assaulted my senses!" It doesn't get more overwhelming then that!! Thanks |
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