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Stop Time
Contributed by
intelectualpoet
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 08:57:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Kneeling over,
A lake filled of tears,
Of loneliness and greed.
I look across.
My eyes are greeted by sheer anger.
Anger caused by stress,
Stress caused be too much to do,
Yet so little time.
If I could only shoot the clock,
That hangs above this pool,
In order to cause time to stand still,
I would.
With time left at a standstill,
I would remain at the pool,
Left wading in my own sorrow,
Sorrow caused by nothing,
And everything all at once.
The nothing from not having anything to do,
And everything,
Brought on by being able,
To do everything...
If you could stop time,
How would you feel???
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intelectualpoet
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2004-03-10 20:57:38]
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Re: Stop Time
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:20:06 PM AEST
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| GOOD WRITE- I THINK WE ARE ALL A LITTLE OVERWHELMED WITH THE RUSH RUSH LIFE OF TODAY- OH HOW I LONG FOR THE YESTERDAYS WHEN LIFE WAS SO MUCH MORE SIMPLE AND TIME SEEMED TO STAND STILL. |
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Re: Stop Time
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:11:31 AM AEST
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"Left wading in my own sorrow,"
Love this line!
Stitch
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