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Love You Better
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 08:00:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You always said I
could have loved you better
still some say I
loved you more
than you deserved
you told me you left
because you were making
me so unhappy but
you took my whole world
with you when you went
Copyright ©
faithmairee
... [
2004-03-10 20:00:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love You Better
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 08:51:10 PM AEST (User
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Aye, it is very sad. My parents are going through a divorce right now and I can't wait till its over. The feeling is firmly radiating out of the poem. Good write. |
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Re: Love You Better
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:01:52 AM AEST (User
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It is truly sad. I don't know why there has to be so much pain associated with love. I liked your poem alot. Kie |
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Re: Love You Better
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:22:49 PM AEST (User
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ooooo, this poem is so beautifully written, so sad, my heart goes out to you, hugs n' love nessa
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