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Our Own Last Sunset
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Picture fades
As memories burn my soul
And there is absolutely no one
To break my lonely fall
Why was I chosen
Worth of being heartbroken
Left with a burden
Of sad words unspoken
Pierce through me
Not the sound, but the silence
It is too early for a test
I still need guidance
Stuck in the past
Our own last sunset
The best day of my life
Is the reason why I'm upset
Love for you
Which I need to express
Still in my heart
But I cannot confess
I don't say anything
Have I lost my voice
Was falling for you
My first wrong choice
The look in my eyes
Reflection in my tears
Smile only for you
Still do after all these years
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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2004-03-10 19:18:00]
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Re: Our Own Last Sunset
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:44:02 PM AEST
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ohhh this is so beautifully sad, through your pen and tears may you find peace, your a wonderful writer, i cannot wait until you post again:) hugs n' smiles n' love nessa
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Re: Our Own Last Sunset
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 10:01:32 PM AEST
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Been meaning to read you for a while now glad I did, nice work.
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Re: Our Own Last Sunset
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by Pompous on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:13:31 AM AEST
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| awesome poem, beautiful and sad |
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Re: Our Own Last Sunset
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:21:53 AM AEST
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| This is very pretty. |
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Re: Our Own Last Sunset
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by Merry on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:44:19 PM AEST
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a very moving write - wonderful work - looking forward to reading much more of your work
merry |
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Re: Our Own Last Sunset
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:32:35 PM AEST
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Tragically sad...incredibly beautiful.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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