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Cup of Death
Contributed by
Trea
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:30:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Clenched hands together till knuckles bore
knees raw and red from earth rough floor
head bowed so low as a beggar's plead
I wondered whom to his words would heed
pain and sorrow gloomed his face
as he begged for mercy and change of fate
Then within a moment of humbled prayer
came a whispering voice out of nowhere
Behold my son so full of grace
I know the woo's of human race
A blood red tear escaped his eye
as a vision showed he should die
greeting goodbye the evening sun
he summons the words thy will be done
soon I'll lay my work to rest
as I drink for them, the cup of death.
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Trea
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2004-03-10 18:30:07]
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Re: Cup of Death
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by Trea on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:06:14 PM AEST
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| can someone tell me what they think please |
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Re: Cup of Death
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:22:59 PM AEST
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I thought it was fantastic loved the words so powerful well done
Brill
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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