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Observations
Contributed by
Val
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:26:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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to tell a lie.
to tell the truth.
to make one cry.
to make one choose.
laughing at a joke when no one else is.
makes the joker happy to know his joke lives.
being shy and quiet only brings you peace.
but without all the wars in life how could leaders come to be.
hate is what rumors can bring rumors were made to corrupt.
voice is where rumors can start it is also where they can stop.
take advantage of the gifts of life sight,taste,hear and learn.
teachers can tell you about the world,but to understand it,all you can do is observe.
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Val
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2004-03-10 14:26:04]
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Re: Observations
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by danimus on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:39:42 PM AEST
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| Great poem!.. I like the way it flows and contrasts.. The off ryhmes are excellent as well. |
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Re: Observations
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by kayald on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:51:25 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was very insightful...i enjoyed reading it because it made me think
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