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No Time To Cry
Contributed by
kellros
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:03:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No time to breakdown,
No time for lies,
No time for mischief,
No time to die
No time to give a hell,
No time to cry,
No time to reason,
No time live and die
No time for anything anymore,
i wish my mother will just die,
and leave a corpse,
would make it allot easier on all of us,
because she ONLY thinks about herself
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kellros
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2004-03-10 14:03:25]
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Re: No Time To Cry
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:23:23 PM AEST
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Well, the first two stanzas were going somewhere, but the third just crumpled into a cry of outrage. It's good to get it out though.
Hope my kids don't think that way about me.
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Re: No Time To Cry
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by arden on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:13:19 PM AEST
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i feel the same way. wow this was so powerful and just awesome! i loved it! great work.
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