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Pain of Caring
Contributed by
lostlove
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 12:09:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I feel so betrayed
You left me alone
Alone in the dark
I cared for you so much
You made me feel whole
But now every time I see
See your sweet face
It brings so much torture
Torture to my soul
You alone made me
Made me once care
Only to bring blackness
Blackness to my soul
The look of your smile
And the sound of your voice
Makes my heart collapse
Collapse in pain
I can only hold on
So much longer
Till my grip on this
This very life
Loses it hold
And fall into the pit
Pit of uncertainty
Copyright ©
lostlove
... [
2004-03-10 12:09:11]
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Re: Pain of Caring
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by arden on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 12:12:26 PM AEST
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this is so sad. but very well written. i liked this alot. wonderfully done. good work keep it up.
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Re: Pain of Caring
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by jc_92024 on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 12:50:24 PM AEST
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I liked this poem. It was real good . I feel your pain i somehow get into these situations a lot. well keep writting it gets me through
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Re: Pain of Caring
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by spider on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:01:38 PM AEST
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like the repatition, works really well.
very heartfelt. like it a lot. |
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