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For the battle of life..
Contributed by
venkat
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:26:35 AM in AEST
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May we for a hundred Autumns see
The lustrous Eye-God ordained to arise before us!
May I have voice in my mouth, breath in my nostrils
Sight in my eyes, hearing in my ears and the great
Strength in my arms as I fight for righteousness!
May I have power in my thighs,
swiftness in my legs and
Steadfastness in my feet as I
Walk in the path of righteousness!
May the Wind God blow His balm on us,
May He bring well being and health to our hearts!
Homage to Him who is the source of supreme bliss
And well being, to Siva, the bestower of happiness
As He helps the men who fight for righteousness !
In me there be the brightness of intellect and fame
And the power of sacrifice; may the Lord of creation
Establish firmly in me like the light of heaven!
Stand erect and cross this stony river flows on!
Leave here those opposed to good and righteous!
Let us cross over to powers that are beneficent
Having crossed over the troublesome places
May we enjoy with for a hundred winters!
Cleaver of skies, victor of earth, armed with thunder
Stands among us to destroy the armies of enemies!
Follow me brothers, let us proceed like heroes,
Friends move on together to cross over this river!
He shines in my heart does not bend before
The strong, nor before the firm nor before
The arrogant challenger, instigated by wicked,
For Him lofty mountains are like plains;
For Him even in the deeps there is a fort;
Siva aids us as we fight for righteousness
Sure the earth and heavens bow before us!
10-3-2004
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:45:42 AM AEST
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For more than one reason, I enjoyed this. *grins*
Your command of devout verse is beyond reproach.
"For Him lofty mountains are like plains;"
Visually impressive and full of colour, as usual. |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:02:52 AM AEST
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| Sir...this is very inspiring and higly uplifting..thanks for sharing your kindness ..keep writing these divine poems .God bless you long life.. |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:13:43 AM AEST
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Something about this write made me stop and smell the roses!!
Well done, Venkat.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by arden on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:14:17 AM AEST
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This was mesmerizing to read. It was so beautiful. A impressive write. Wonderfully done.
Arden |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:24:25 PM AEST
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wonderful how you wrote this dear venkat, no matter what your reader believes faith wise there is a spiritual etheral feel to this poem that makes one have a smile in their heart and hope in their soul, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:32:33 PM AEST
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Again I say.....you are the master of this type of write. This was an excellent and inspiring message.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:01:30 PM AEST
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The righteous shall persevere! May the rays that shine down upon you, be forthcoming and shine on all who catch a glimpse of this beautiful write! Well done,once again, my friend!
Angel always...godspeed...Joni |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:06:45 PM AEST
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you my friend always take us to a high place spiritually, wonderfully written
Shari |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:12:04 PM AEST
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| Strong words that portray the faith you have ... a powerful write ... Jan |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:21:26 PM AEST
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| It was almost like a prayer and so uplifting to read. You paint the most beautiful images with your words. Well done again. Kie |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:30:00 PM AEST
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Beautiful work, as usual, my friend. Your search is inspiring.
Rita |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:59:26 PM AEST
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Again, a very vivid prayer. You are a person (really a sage) that has I am sure meditated very deeply this does come from the usual mortal.
By the way what happened in here last night, was there a meeting and you ALL decided to post inspirational poems or something?
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by emystar on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 01:25:43 AM AEST
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in Jesus name I amen this!
Very powerfull prayer that we all need each-n-every day.
It's so powerfull that it's magic to ones ear.
luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for all your awesome comments and support of my work. |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by kalika_vidya on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:25:38 AM AEST
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| very majestic.. |
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Re: For the battle of life..
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 09:16:47 PM AEST
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| beautiful, all i can say is beautiful. "Siva aids us as we fight for righteousness." |
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