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Dear Marie
Contributed by
kayald
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Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:34:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I’m here hun
And though you may not
Want me to,
I’m worried
Scared
But only ‘cuz I love you
Helpless
I don’t want you to
Push me away
I’m here hun
Even if you think I don’t care
You are skinny
I know you don’t believe it
So I don’t say it
Don’t push me away
I’m here hun
I don’t mention it
And I’ll never tell
But if the worst happens
It will be my fault
I’m here hun
And you can’t push me away
I’m going through this
With you
So you can understand
I won’t desert you now
Not when you need a helping hand
I’m here hun
Don’t push me away
Copyright ©
kayald
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2004-03-09 23:34:57]
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Re: Dear Marie
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by Jade on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:46:59 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem, sad, but great. I think even though she does not believe you when you say she is skinny you should keep saying it. Let her know there are hundreds of us who have been there and understand what she is going through. |
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Re: Dear Marie
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by perfection on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:47:58 PM AEST
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| Hey Great Poem. |
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Re: Dear Marie
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:48:16 PM AEST
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Awww this is so tender and sweet.... hope she knows how you feel..
Jenni |
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Re: Dear Marie
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 12:44:32 AM AEST
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Hey! Great poem! Don't give up on her and don't let her give up... she needs u now more than ever!! Ur both in my prayers!!!
~Donna~
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Re: Dear Marie
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by hidden_dezires on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:22:53 AM AEST
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| quite touching ..your friend is lucky to have someone who cares as you do...loved it alot....hd |
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Re: Dear Marie
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:00:03 AM AEST
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| wonderfully loving caring poem, hugs n' love nessa |
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