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Another Day Goes By
Contributed by
Whisper
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Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:58:22 PM in AEST
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Everythings kinda swishy beneath my feet as I walk.
I wonder how many see , there is something wrong with me
I"m wondering around incomplete
I feel numb ,dreamy , and thoughts are crowding my brain.
Not so much that they are painful, and sad reminders of things gone bye
But today it seemed more easier to deal with
It"s a odd feeling just walking and yet not knowing where your really going .
Just going through the motions .
It"s Another Day .
Is it so much different then any other ?
Maybe, I can't know.
I"m walking on swishy feet and my heads in a cloud
And I am wondering if anybody really knows.
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Whisper
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Re: Another Day Goes By
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:16:30 PM AEST
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Sadly...yes... Nice write.... well said!!
Jenni |
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Re: Another Day Goes By
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:17:57 PM AEST
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| Welcome to my life! I'm with Jenn yes i've known so many i've lost count. Liked this one alot. Kie |
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Re: Another Day Goes By
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:29:29 PM AEST
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Yes I've knowin' those days too. Nice write keep 'em comin'!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Another Day Goes By
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:33:26 PM AEST
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| liked this to infinity. Sometimes I don't quite know who I am...I thought all poets were like that...we're an odd lot sometimes. Very bright though!!!!! |
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Re: Another Day Goes By
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:49:25 PM AEST
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| wonderful, yes, i too contemplate life, swishy feet and all, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Another Day Goes By
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 06:18:58 AM AEST
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Superb....
You have just got to read my latest "Growing old disgracefully"
We seem to have a lot in common
bob |
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