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To Be Alright Again
Contributed by
stalkee
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Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:30:10 PM in AEST
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I seem to always pick the worst times,
to go and put doubts in my mind
And thats how I destroyed what wasn't made
I started freaking out, got just a little scared...
Scared of making a stupid mistake
That's what shattered the night,
where I finally had a good time and felt alright
I started doubting what I should do,
and I started panicking inside
And I could never do any of what I meant to
I thought that it was all for sure,
then I started to feel insecure
I guess I'm destined to never get it right
Destined for more of this stuff
What I wouldn't give to go back to that night
Well I've been tormented everyday,
ever since that day took place...
If only I could fix what happened then,
so maybe I could know how it feels to be alright again
Copyright ©
stalkee
... [
2004-03-09 21:30:10]
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Re: To Be Alright Again
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:38:12 PM AEST
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sad.. but very well written. i really liked this one. great write keep up the good work.
Arden |
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Re: To Be Alright Again
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by crap_snapper on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:44:09 PM AEST
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| I liked it, some nice lines |
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Re: To Be Alright Again
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:07:25 PM AEST
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| awwww! hang in there, big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: To Be Alright Again
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by New_York_Chick on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:58:31 PM AEST
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good poem
wishing you "to be alright again"
feel better |
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Re: To Be Alright Again
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:39:24 PM AEST
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| Hold on there. Emotional write which I can relate to. Felt like that so many times. |
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Re: To Be Alright Again
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by Chilibear on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:16:24 AM AEST
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Wow, that was great! Keep it up. I hope you feel all right again.
- Lots of love, Chilibear
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