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I Did This...I Did This To You
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 08:47:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She held a silver gun in her hand
Her finger prickling with anguish,
It pulled slowly on the smooth trigger
A loud bang shattered the twinkling sky
An evil, smirking smile curled across her lips
She held the gun close to her hip
Her dainty hands let away the fatal weapon
Cerulean, tear rimmed eyes stare blankly
Silky blood trailed like a river, from his head,
Emptying into the vile, rushing sewer
The screaming shadows smothered the murdered body
Another innocent like was taken away, by pure suffering
Not realizing what hold had taken over her
A scorching fire burned in her
Dead he was, lying there like stiff metal
I did this…I did this to you.
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-03-09 20:47:21]
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Re: I Did This...I Did This To You
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 08:59:09 PM AEST
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i like it. nice work keep it up
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Re: I Did This...I Did This To You
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:02:22 PM AEST
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| Can't wait to read the novel! Great work! |
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Re: I Did This...I Did This To You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:07:58 PM AEST
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| Thats really good, I like this. |
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