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Hopeless Romantic
Contributed by
darien
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Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 06:53:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The Seventh Circle calls out
The sun sinks its last for me
For even if I awake tomorrow
The darkness is all I will see
An illness has crept in my body
An illness without any cure
As only I can will this away
But that doesn't matter anymore
Cupid's arrow was diseased
Although its aim was true
A second shaft was never fired
And my heart has been cleaved in two
That the Forest would be this inviting
As a place to make my own
And leave all these feelings behind me
And find it my eternal home
I don't want to go on alone
When true love has revealed her name
But told me I wasn't enough
And filled me with all this pain
Tonight the tears caress me
As I head for a cursed sleep
To dream of how it could have been
With the one for whom I weep
Copyright ©
darien
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2004-03-09 18:53:02]
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Re: Hopeless Romantic
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by gothicangel on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:15:55 PM AEST
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Oh, this poem was so great=) I could totally see myself in that poem! Gl!
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Re: Hopeless Romantic
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by SirensLight on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:52:10 PM AEST
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| A wonderufl poem.. though the topic was painful you have displayed wonderfully your emotions and how you feel... though you may laugh at me or curse me for saying this.. know that time doesn not heal all wounds.. only love does that... |
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Re: Hopeless Romantic
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by SirensLight on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:52:25 PM AEST
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| A wonderufl poem.. though the topic was painful you have displayed wonderfully your emotions and how you feel... though you may laugh at me or curse me for saying this.. know that time does not heal all wounds.. only love does that... |
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Re: Hopeless Romantic
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by LiquidChaos on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:44:08 PM AEST
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awesome. i wish i could write like that. i look forward to reading more of your material in the future.
keep rockin in the free world. |
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Re: Hopeless Romantic
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:56:27 PM AEST
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| this is really good... love the verse about cupid's arrow. I just posted a poem too that I wrote about being a hopeless romantic... it's called "You WERE MY Favorite"... weird how I was kinda in this same mood all week... feelig alone, left behind by the one I love. Anyways I really enjoyed this poem. See ya later. |
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