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Destroying Your Life?
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:14:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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smash your room,
cut your-self,
talk like a baby,
dance like an elf.
become a foul-mouthed sl**,
brake the rules of the community,
slam your door shut,
diss-respect your society.
become a graffiti master,
the best in your group,
become a hypocrite,
never slurp you soup.
always be aggressive,
never behave in class,
join a group of "heavies",
some where along your path!
never think twice,
let it be all about your-self,
never answer back,
put an old toy on the dirty self.
never think for a minute,
never sit in silence,
never have help,
as all life gives you is violence.
never give a toss,
think perfect ness is a curse,
live with things until you need the money,
then go steel out off some-one's purse...
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deathdrop
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2004-03-09 17:14:04]
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Re: Destroying Your Life?
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:17:45 PM AEST
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*thinking* i can see where yur comnig from, and where you go with it. though it almost seems like yur walking out onto a minefield with this write, quite brave... but nonetheless, a good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Destroying Your Life?
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by sicknivesevered on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:38:49 PM AEST
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| Aye, I enjoyed this. |
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Re: Destroying Your Life?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:50:25 PM AEST
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I gave this a chance - I'm glad I did.
Very evocative - god, you remind me of someone I know . . . *grins*
Good job. |
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Re: Destroying Your Life?
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 06:03:24 PM AEST
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| This was quite interesting and strong in thought. I enjoyed it. Kie |
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