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Can you save me?
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:26:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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another rip in the sky
more blood smeared on the road
just an ordinary day
heartless and cold
life passes me by
from my lonley little world
my heart collapsed
lonley and burned
black and unbeating
I can no longer see
please, anyone
can you save me?
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kailadragon
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2004-03-09 15:26:03]
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Re: Can you save me?
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 04:43:50 PM AEST
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| this is beautifully dark, im always here if you'd like to talk too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Can you save me?
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:13:38 PM AEST
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the pleading in this, so sad... but it's nice and poetic and good writing. sad and poetic... *thinking* yea, that's some good writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Can you save me?
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:15:45 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poem. I loved the inages it produced. You can always pm me, if you'd like! Wonderfully written... |
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