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Summoned by the Winds
Contributed by
PoeticRequiem
on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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To lose yourself in an airy labyrinth
or to be touched by a million unseen fingers
flowing through you,
caressing and tickling your soul;
carrying you away on imagination and gently
setting you down in soft cotton field dreams.
Light gusts of heaven holding me,
cradling my being,
consoling my broken peace.
Gales of inspiration whispering in my ear
soothing an unsettled mind.
I close my eyes and am lost in a moment
of breathless wonder.
To dance within spirraling winds
encircling my warm passion.
I hear your calling and wish to follow your
path until the ending of time.
By; Jeremiah D. Normich
Copyright ©
PoeticRequiem
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2004-03-09 15:25:23]
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Re: Summoned by the Winds
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:30:03 PM AEST
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nice wording. i liked this. very good write.
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Re: Summoned by the Winds
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:56:40 PM AEST
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Well, the introduction certainly caught my eye. lol
Your poem is quite eye-catching too!
Very sensuously worded,
Well done. |
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Re: Summoned by the Winds
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by Alli on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:37:59 AM AEST
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| Absolutely breathtaking! Very nice display of word manipulation, beautiful. |
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