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when they took it away
Contributed by
ruby1987
on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:54:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can’t have you
I don’t want you
I thought I didn’t love you
I thought there’d be no pain-
When they’d find out our secret story
But I felt it when they took you away-
I felt lost
And now I can only imagine you
And the tender way you stroked me
And recall upon the memories of when we met in secret
That’s all I have left
I never thought it was love
I assumed it was lust
So I did not care for you that much
But I felt it when they took it away
I’d die now…
Because I should have kissed you more
I felt it when they took you way!
Copyright ©
ruby1987
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2004-03-09 13:54:13]
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Re: when they took it away
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by LornyaNarFuinenya on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:59:51 PM AEST
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| awww that was a sad poem..poor dear hope things turn out allright for you in the end, god bless;) |
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Re: when they took it away
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:06:09 PM AEST
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Took it for granted, to late now,
can't go back, anyway you knew eventually he had to go...
anyways good luck, nice poem |
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Re: when they took it away
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:26:15 PM AEST
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| Typical of many lives. Just when one had it all. it is taken away. Thats life for you keep smiling from bernard |
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Re: when they took it away
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:58:08 PM AEST
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Really sad emotional stuff, excellent write!
I'm off to write something silly to cheer myself up!
wildejohnny. |
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