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Brave Knight XL
Contributed by
ramfire
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Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:11:13 PM in AEST
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"Is Guenevere attending Katharine?
Will my love show herself to me next day?
Can sweet young rose then o'er embrasure lean?
If nay, then my blue skies will be dark gray.
Should I soon see her, I could face strong fray.
Tell me true sire, will damsel be thus free?
Heart's care divinely wishes be it may
But know whate'er haps I'll stand close to thee.
For liege, at Castle Throme much danger I foresee."
"Think I that Guenevere's at Throme, good knight,
and she can see your face next day with ease.
Tis so, before you see the day's last light
an opportune chance meeting's thine to seize.
But see, strong knight, there cometh a sharp breeze
and me thinks we should hasten speed to Throme.
This coming rain and lightning they ill please.
Where seen your second knight this day might roam?
This fine and faithful knight Sir Berry de Jerome."
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Re: Brave Knight XL
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by LornyaNarFuinenya on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:18:45 PM AEST
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| oh that was cute, nice job, i really liked how you made it sound like old nglish, nice ;) |
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Re: Brave Knight XL
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:30:16 PM AEST
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abit hard to read, very interesting, very good rhyming...
you sure they didn't take you from the late 15 century? |
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