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You Say, I Say
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:07:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You bring the smiles
I bring the pain
You say im forgiven
I go do it again
You say lets stay in
I say lets go out
You say that you love me
I say that theres doubt
You say your bored
I say im not
You say your cold
I say im hot
You say its half full
I say its half empty
You say i dont care enough
I say that its plenty
You say its heavy
I say its light
I say walk away
You say stay and fight.!!
You say Love
I say Hate
I blame You
You blame Fate......
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LouisaMontagu
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2004-03-09 13:07:46]
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Re: You Say, I Say
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by LornyaNarFuinenya on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:20:18 PM AEST
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| wow, that was cool,nice job, hope it is not real though good luck;) |
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Re: You Say, I Say
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:47:55 PM AEST
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| I loved the whole feel of this poem. The way it went back and forth. A truly unique write and the flow was just perfect. Great job I commend you. Kie |
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Re: You Say, I Say
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by Baronhawk on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 04:39:36 PM AEST
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| Ha ha ha ha...nice work. Kinda reminds me of the ongoing see-saw of men and women...it infuriates me when I find ladies who contradicts and expounds my various convictions but somehow I seek them out for I receive pleasure in the frequent arguments....you are right...oposites do attract. |
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Re: You Say, I Say
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:29:49 AM AEST
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| really liked that piece, so strong, t should be in a book, if everyone wrote like this this website would be 100000000000000000x better xxxxxxxxxjazzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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