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dancing
Contributed by
merry
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Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:12:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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I dance for you on the arm of the chair
leaning backwards and falling for you
crossing my legs so you wouldn't stare
there is nothing and everything true
I watched and you watched and we waited
for something to click in the long silent spaces
you asked and I answered simply stated
we took our time each one in our places
we talked and found so much familiar
to hold each other would be bliss
we both remarked it was peculiar
to savor the sight of and taste the kiss
almost instant rapport and delight
found in your bold tongue and blue eyes
suggesting we take it to new heights
what am I willing to sacrifice
the hint of freedom, just a word
happiness hanging in the balance
or am I simply being absurd
playing with love’s fire per chance
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-03-09 11:12:00]
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Re: dancing
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:52:57 AM AEST
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Another great write. How do you do it?
Stitch |
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Re: dancing
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:02:22 PM AEST
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If you brave the fire, just remember how easy it is to get burned. ;o)
Excellent peice of poetry here as always.
Roses
Larry
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Re: dancing
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:04:38 AM AEST
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| Merry, I love this write! Sometimes you just pluck my feelings from my heart and splash them on the page ... thanks, lol ... every verse is so well said ... I think this is my favourite poem of yours ... hugs, *daisies* Jan |
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Re: dancing
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:05:56 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this.
Nicely written scene, with a calculated rhyme.
Good work. |
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