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What life

Contributed by eugene on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:50:43 AM in AEST
Topic: political



I wonder, and I wonder;
and atimes I just ponder
at this life we are living,
wishing I can live dieing.
.......................................
today it's hidden hatred,
morrow, a hatred sacred;
I wish I can just turn a fly
with the hope I'll still die.
........................................
justice is daily murdered;
love always slaughtered
in this life we are living,
why can't death be calling.
........................................
even with god lies no relief,
this leading god, our belief;
hallowed by a demo palsy,
this god called democracy.




Copyright © eugene ... [ 2004-03-09 05:50:43]
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Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 06:55:06 AM AEST
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God is not democracy..God depends upon the fath of human beings..and miracles we do not expect from God to change our governments. Success of a democracy depends upon its constitotion and the discretion excercised the civilians of a country/state..if democracy fails the people or its voters are to be blamed for not electing proper persons to power..we can not deny the fact that most of the present day democracies are controlled either by global or internal capitalists or their supporters..let us hope good days..venkat


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by EUGENE on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:07:47 AM AEST
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Thank u VENKAT, u never cease from offering amazingly useful advices, I appreciate your contribution to this... I believe you hit the point at the head when u said it's the peoples' fault when they vote in the wrong people. This is worth a good answer in our case here in NIGERIA


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:30:12 AM AEST
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The message while short, yet easily grasped... I for one would have used unrhymed lines for a poem like this... in order not to allow musical rhymes interfere with the seriousness of my message. What do u think about this?


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:13:45 AM AEST
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i must admitt i had to read this a few times becos like alot of what you write it can be interpeted to mean different things to diffferent people like God, i ddint get what someone before me got...but i totally understand where your coming from...and your are right ...im much in to political poems but i must admitt that this one drew me in....slr


Re: What life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:27:23 AM AEST
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I am lucky to be from a great country like the US, we have our problems but democracy is surely the best for us


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:32:25 PM AEST
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Well I really can't comment on this as u an individual 'cause I know nothing of everyday life for u.
I'm just thankfull that I'm a native born American from USA.
I like what venket said.
Maybe u can make me understand a bit more about your culture etc.
You've expressed your self well once again.
keep it up.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: What life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:49:00 AM AEST
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It's not very outspoken, you need to make it stand out more


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_justice101 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:50:18 AM AEST
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Besides, God and polotics should not be involved in the same sentence. If you are going to mix them then you should not be a writer.


Re: What life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:50:20 AM AEST
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Besides, God and polotics should not be involved in the same sentence. If you are going to mix them then you should not be a writer.


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by Sylvias on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:37:02 PM AEST
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Deep.


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:13:27 AM AEST
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Yet another retarded comment by Imbecile101.

This poem is great.
Keep writing, eugene.


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:49:53 PM AEST
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I think this is a good commentary of where our trust lies...
I do believe in democracy, and think it is best for us, but in the end, my trust will lie only in God.
Psalm 118:9
It is better to trust in the LORD Than to put confidence in princes.

Emily


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 11:00:30 AM AEST
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Your poem was well done. I do beleive in democracy. I also beleive that things will change when people care enough to get involved. That's what democracy is all about.


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by UnmovedMover on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 04:37:49 PM AEST
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The first three stanzas were bland, mediocre at best, but when I got to the final stanza I thought it was great. That last stanza is excellent but the poem as a whole doesn't really relate...


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 02:39:55 PM AEST
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Can't say anything about the quality of writing but the message is clear.


Re: What life (User Rating: 1 )
by heavenly_kiss on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 12:54:09 AM AEST
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I like this, I really do.

Good play on words...




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