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More Than a Kindergarten Finger Painting
Contributed by
waos
on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:17:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lightly browned canvas
slowly filling, consumed with markings.
Scarcely fading, wading waters
too heavy and deep.
Changing colors
like magic markers,
like those toy cars you put under water,
but without so many options.
Some accidental streaks
upon that canvas.
Some hastily strewn on splatters.
From bright and vibrant
slowly changing to dead and dying.
A final picture
streaked over with a magic healing white,
So pure, where all color ran out.
A masterpiece to the maker;
but to critics an atrocity.
But each critique
simply adds to the cluttered beauty
of the maker's new masterpiece.
Copyright ©
waos
... [
2004-03-09 01:17:28]
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Re: More Than a Kindergarten Finger Painting
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:38:21 AM AEST
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| Mmm .. .I like poems like this ... thoughtful, interesting and well written ... Jan |
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Re: More Than a Kindergarten Finger Painting
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:29:30 AM AEST
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| well written, great images, made me remember how much fun that was when i was a kiddling, your insightful, keep writing, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: More Than a Kindergarten Finger Painting
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by slackoffsamiam on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:30:05 PM AEST
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| Great imagery, I can truly appreciate this poem |
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