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IN THE STILL OF THE SOUL
Contributed by
Del
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Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 12:19:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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You may say to someone, 'I love you.'
Are you sure your love is real?
In the still of your soul you wonder,
Is this exactly the way I feel?
Our hearts may tell us something,
That our souls do not accept.
In the still of our soul we know,
So many secrets are kept.
Most everyone in our world prays to a God.
Worshiping him like you were taught to do.
In the still of the soul you're wondering,
Are all these Gods listening to you?
I always felt, in the still of my soul
Wars and strife will never cease.
Until we all only pray to one God
We'll never find love or world
peace.
Copyright ©
Del
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2004-03-09 00:19:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: IN THE STILL OF THE SOUL
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:23:41 PM AEST (User
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*thinking* curious little write, made me think on a number of things. i like it, it's intruiging! ;0)
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Re: IN THE STILL OF THE SOUL
(User Rating: 1 ) by Standing_alone on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:38:01 AM AEST (User
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I think that, that holds meaning to all of us. Seeing as most people learn to love people they know they either cant have, or cant make room for in their life at the moment, because of some reason or another, yet your heart wants it so badly, yet your soul knows that it would be best to not go with it.
Anyways, it was a really good poem. |
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Re: IN THE STILL OF THE SOUL
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:14:31 AM AEST (User
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Your lack of participation on this site is a disgrace.
235 poems and only 1 comment??
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