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Keep My Cool
Contributed by
WannaDieCuzImEMO
on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:39:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I may look fine on the outside
But on the inside I'm falling apart
First, my eyes start crying,
Then my broken heart
Next, go my arms, as I try to be good
But I'm not at all, I stop eating food
My bodies falling apart
But I made it that way
Everyone thinks I have nothing to say
I'm screaming and crying, out to you
But, I stay quiet, just keep my cool
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WannaDieCuzImEMO
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2004-03-08 22:39:19]
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Re: Keep My Cool
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by Arius-Inues on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:41:48 PM AEST
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| I can really relate with this poem. Im just like it. Over all good wright! |
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Re: Keep My Cool
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by Kie on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:05:40 PM AEST
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| This just broke my heart. I thought your poem was really well constructed but your words just brought tears to my eyes. Kie |
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