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Resonance
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:45:28 PM in AEST
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I fall to my knees
As my life leaves my body
Tried to be everything
To everyone way too long
Well here I am only me
Take me as I've always been
Or walk away and leave me be
Too many long nights wasted
What if thoughts running in my head
No ones left to hold me tight
Nothing here I don't feel safe
Looked for love to save me
But it stole my life from me
The phone lays silent so long
Stopped holding my breath long ago
You left with promises to return
Guess it's just another thing broken
Maybe I was always just a joke
Once I swore I would die for you
I just never meant like this
Watched it all fall apart
Tried to save it so many times
Have to leave this place
Can't stand it's face
Going away to hide myself
Got to try and save myself
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-03-08 19:45:28]
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Re: Resonance
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by arden on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:48:29 PM AEST
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thats really sad...
but very well written. i liked this alot. nicely done.
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Re: Resonance
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:49:48 PM AEST
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I know the feeling.
Great write, sad but has a touch of self awakening i think.
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Re: Resonance
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by Kie on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:58:50 PM AEST
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| This is an incredibly sad poem Cobalt. Filled with raw honesty, introspection and true reality. A broken heart takes time to heal and it is painful while it is healing. I hope you find love and happiness because you deserve it. Kie |
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Re: Resonance
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 09:35:15 PM AEST
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Awww..so lovely....so sad....and so full of emotions.... Loved this....
(Miss your whistling tho...) *wink*
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Resonance
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:47:12 AM AEST
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on the darker side for me shows the hurt side of you very well and your talent is unmatched smile again
michelle |
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