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This is the truth
Contributed by
luckycharm
on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:20:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is more than,
Just living,
It's about the important,
Things close to you,
Love is a gift,
That touches the heart,
Makes my soul whole,
Again,
When u know you've had enuff,
Don't blame yourself,
Cause you can depend,
On you,
Never give in on something,
U know ain't right,
If u do,
U got to fight,
Your own battles,
I have learned that,
Some people u may love,
They can turn their backs,
Right on u,
But in life,
I've also learned,
To move on,
It does not matter who u are,
As long as u,
Love yourself,
You may have,
Very low self-esteem,
But there's a way,
To make things better,
In life for u,
If u have that faith in u,
Can't nothing bring u down,
If u only believe,
What's in your heart,
You will be able,
To succeed,
And don't ever,
Forget that
Copyright ©
luckycharm
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Re: This is the truth
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:24:48 PM AEST
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Great write and a good boost to the one's who needs one----->Like me
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Re: This is the truth
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by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:32:00 PM AEST
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really inspirational
great poem |
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Re: This is the truth
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by Kie on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 08:00:57 PM AEST
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| I have to agree this is a great boost. To be so young you have alot of wisdom in your writes. I'll remember this one for a long time. Don't stop writing you just keep getting better and better! Kie |
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Re: This is the truth
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:44:00 AM AEST
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this is a really good poem however try to actually write the words it is a little hard to read with just the u other then that it is a lift
michelle |
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Re: This is the truth
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:48:14 AM AEST
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Such an important and hard learned lesson. You've captured it well.
Stitch |
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