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Suicide.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 04:41:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I can't stay up,
all night,
so writing can't stop,
this inner fight.
i want to shred,
until i die,
feel the extreme pain,
of my suicide.
with no parts of me,
to hold me back,
i need this now,
to free me of the black.
schools tomorrow,
and that i can't face,
and i'm only one person,
to be demolished from the human race.
so i can't see why it should matter,
my life hopeless anyway,
my life's fallen apart in my hands,
and i'd hate to live another day...
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deathdrop
... [
2004-03-08 16:41:02]
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Re: Suicide.
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by lildrama04 on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 04:50:36 PM AEST
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| Hey listen Amy if that is your name please Suicide is the not answer I'm surious I used to be suicidal and I got to a point in my life where I wanted to die all the time. I used to believe that life was really stupid and there was no point to it. I thought that I couldn't live another day and then I meet my best friend. Listen to me if you really need someone to talk to I'm here for you and I'm surious I have read your entries and I believe that if you never wanted to be alive then God would have already taken you away. What you are feeling right now is the devil trying to take over your soul and it's working. Just remember this one thing Jesus died on the cross for your sins. |
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Re: Suicide.
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 04:03:10 PM AEST
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i really like how you wrote this youve got alot of talent. dont ever give up. keep up the awesome work.
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Re: Suicide.
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by karl_wiggins on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:49:17 PM AEST
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Don't top yourself, Deathdrop, you'll only have to come around and do it all over again. And situations change. You're going to be mighty sick if you meet the boyfriend of your dreams or win the lottery a second or two after you've laid yourself down to die. And I've seen someone who's topped himself. It's not pretty.
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Re: Suicide.
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by srugglingyoungster on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:54:10 PM AEST
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hey,
i know how you feel, this isnt a joke though. suicide is for real. and its stupid, i know, ive tried to do it. sad. but then i remembered what someone told me, " suicide doesnt help, it doesnt take the pian away and it sure as hell don't fix your problems, it only adds." So yeah, that amazingly kept me here. Jusst dont be stupid. Its cool to write about it and get your feelings out about how you feel about it and stuff, but stay here, we need you and your family friends and whoever else you know needs you.
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