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This Shipwreck Called Life
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 04:20:59 PM in AEST
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I'm floating upon life's stormy seas
Thrusted to and fro by the raging winds that blow
The tempest that drives the seas
I know not which way is home... for land I cannot see
I've lost my sense of direction
As I cry out oh, Lord, to thee
I wander from day unto day
Never knowing where I'll be...
Where I'll rest my weary head at night
Or even if I'll find something to eat
In this shipwreck called life
I've been told to seek the Lord
In such times as these
Although I cannot feel His touch... or His face to see
I know He is there... I just have to believe
There has been no life preserver thrown out upon this raging sea
No ship to be sturdy beneath my feet
No life raft launched to carry me home
As I float upon life stormy seas
In this shipwreck called life
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Re: This Shipwreck Called Life
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 05:30:51 PM AEST
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wnderful clever and so so true the imagery of this poem is great i lonve it
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Re: This Shipwreck Called Life
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by morelikelyrics on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 05:44:22 PM AEST
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excellent poem...
sounds so familiar... maybe cause i can relate wuite well to it... very clever work... unique and creative writing like this is in my opinion the best kind of poetry, keep it up |
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Re: This Shipwreck Called Life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:49:18 PM AEST
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This is really good....I love the imagery in it...and the message in it, tho subtle, is an important one....
Thanks for sharing...
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Re: This Shipwreck Called Life
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:12:04 PM AEST
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wonderfully done. i really like this. good work keep it up.
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Re: This Shipwreck Called Life
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by hidden_dezires on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:05:27 AM AEST
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| THIS WAS A REALLY NICE POEM AND I LOVED THE TITLE IT CAUGHT MY EYE...GREAT WRITE...KEEP THEM COMING....HD |
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