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Suicide Note.

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:14:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



to all those who cared for me,
when you find this, i'm sorry.

i've just reached my, darkest depth,
and i can't go on, living like this.
my path was vivid, but now it's clear,
and i can't live, molded by fear.
if you look in my room, you'll find a razor,
and then there's blood, on my school blazer.
and next to my razor, there's blood-clotted tissue,
and i'm sorry to say this, but won't miss you!
i left the house today, unsure of if i'd to do it,
todays been hell, and just urged me to do it.
i'm writting this, as i sit in lesson,
rhyming because you know it's my gift and blessing.
i'll never miss you, for that i'm sorry.
you hurt me to much, i won't be around any more, so don't worry...




Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-03-08 14:14:39]
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Re: Suicide Note. (User Rating: 1 )
by lildrama04 on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:20:18 PM AEST
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Hey listen please don't end your life please there is alot of people out there who care about you and if you don't want to believe it go and ask someone that you care about and see if they care about you.


Re: Suicide Note. (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:24:09 PM AEST
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I'm not asking you to not kill yourself, after all you are not seeking sympathy, maybe understanding... i know from experience people just don't go around taking their lives... we here at the... to me.... the dead poets society doesn't want a memeber to leave us... if you can help us, you are wanted...


Re: Suicide Note. (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poetry2404 on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:50:49 PM AEST
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thats really good. but believe me suicide isnt tha answer. ~*~silent tears, silent cries, silent fears~*~


Re: Suicide Note. (User Rating: 1 )
by karl_wiggins on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:52:50 PM AEST
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Eat your shadow, Deathdrop. You'll step a little lighter then.

And besides, you've no right to deprive the world of the great poet you're going to be. Just think of all those poems that haven't been written yet.

Karl


Re: Suicide Note. (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:51:11 PM AEST
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Hey its a wonderful note/poem. It tears me up inside when people want to commit suicide.
But Im glad your still here.
Continue writing the poetry you love because it may convince others to think twice about commiting suicide.
Love your writing, hope to see more

Kisses,
~Soulless~




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