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one kiss
Contributed by
bear8807
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Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:36:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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time and space don't exsist
life all stops with just your kiss
will you be there for me
for as far as i can see
i would live and never die
just as long as you don't say good-bye
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Re: one kiss
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:45:46 AM AEST
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Hi bear8807,
very good, heartfelt very moving,
that first kiss can last a life time.good write. |
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Re: one kiss
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 12:12:22 PM AEST
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Very nice lil verse there... I can relate total to it ... that first kiss... I think it's that way for everyone...lol
~Donna~ |
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Re: one kiss
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:38:15 AM AEST
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short and very sweet, i loved this! very well written. nice talent you have.
Arden |
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