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FRIENDSHIPS TEST
Contributed by
desire
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Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:45:02 AM in AEST
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thank you Father for being there today
there was so much i needed to say
about the madness going on
i needed your guidance to keep me strong
it was just confusion and miscommunication
that played over and over like a radio station
talking and never really being heard
i just needed someone to understand my words
to calm me down and help me relax
helping me better understand all the facts
of a situation blown out of contex
and why i let anger be my reflex
normally i was just say whatever and move on
but i needed him to know he had me all wrong
but i took a moment to gather my thoughts and say
i'm going and even though we dont agree its ok
i'm still going to be your friend anyway
so i left it at that and went about my day
to know me is to understand that silence is my way
to deal with things that may ruin my day
friends argue and they will not always agree
that's just a fact, a reality
but its how we handle it, that's what counts
you can find understanding or let anger mount
i chose to agree to disagree for its the best way
and it keeps friendships more peaceful i would say
so in the end it all worked out for the best
i know now, it was just you FATHER putting our friendship to the test
Copyright ©
desire
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2004-03-08 10:45:02]
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Re: FRIENDSHIPS TEST
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by Kie on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 05:33:49 PM AEST
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| Your poem had a wonderful flow and was meaningful. Quite inspirational as well. I thank you for your gracious comments on my poems that was kind of you. I also liked the title it drew my eye. |
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Re: FRIENDSHIPS TEST
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by uchendu on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:25:35 PM AEST
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| IT'S HARD TO COMMENT ON CERTAIN THINGS LIKE THE SCENARIOR EXPRESSED IN THIS POEM. NOW... I DON'T HAVE EYES TO SEE HOW THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN, THE STYLE AND DICTION I CAN TALK ABOUT.. AND PLEASE FORGIVE FOR THIS DESIRE... ALL CAN SAY IS ON THE THEME: IT HAS MY 101% UNDERSTANDING. |
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Re: FRIENDSHIPS TEST
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:48:59 AM AEST
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Good write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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