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shhhhh
Contributed by
ShhhhImNotHere
on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 05:02:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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We fell in love
love flew like a dove
we were so happy
all was well,
We fell out of love
love's flown like a dove
now i'm not happy
life is hell,
We planned a life
before i was his wife
he left me high and dry
so now i sit and cry,
If that's not enough
let me tell you
he left me something
a secret too,
A special gift
quite dear to me
but he is far
across the sea,
He doesn't know
and i'm not tellin'
but pretty soon
tummy'll be swellen,
Should i tell him
now or never
he loves me not
does it matter?
Now what am i
suppose to do?
he loves me not
so i ask you...
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ShhhhImNotHere
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2004-03-08 05:02:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: shhhhh
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:43:17 AM AEST (User
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Lovely write..touch situation... best of luck..
Welcome to ypdc......
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Re: shhhhh
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:48:12 AM AEST (User
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very well done.....he is just as responsible as you.
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Re: shhhhh
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:46:02 PM AEST (User
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Think what is best for the child in the long run. A child always needs to know who their parents are, good or bad. He deserves to know the truth. Now whether he will live up to his responsibility is another thing, but don't cheat the child. Tough decision you have.
Rita |
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