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Drown
Contributed by
silent
on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 04:17:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Take your time walking down that road
Treading carefully through a lifelong dream
Coldness of reflection touching smooth skin
Soft waves washing away sensitive thoughts
Lost to the tranquil mindset of sweet death
Freezing underneath the moons gentle gaze
Swimming with a determined panic
It must end, now, now
Pushing down into the depths of pain
Crushing weight upon my lungs
Laughing inside, die you useless *****
Hatred playing out inside your personal tv set
both sides flashing by, without thought
The end?
Copyright ©
silent
... [
2004-03-08 04:17:45]
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Re: Drown
(User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:37:18 PM AEST
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| Drowning is one of the most terrifying ways to die...according to some studies...but I guess we can't be sure as no one who did ever came back to tell us. Rather dark but applicable...I am terrified of drowning...and I feel fear just reading this vivid poem....1..2..3.....okay I'm cool again...stop that hyperventilating |
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Re: Drown
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:20:49 AM AEST
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You are tormented, aren't you. Cutting words, strong description, the way poetry should be.
Hur |
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