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BLACK... RED...
Contributed by
Bro
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Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 12:51:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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RED... BLACK...
A red flame
Burns the frame
Of which he looks through
To see her picture
A picture of which was taken
So... So far away
In another world
Apart from him
In another universe
Of black and red
The black ashes...
The remains of her picture
That flutter to the ground
To be un-known
By none other than him
Only time travel
To the past
Can fix all this
Not even a cast
Of love... of desire...
Of hate...
Of the person...
That took her away...
Only to say things
That dont make her happy
The thoughts
Of Traveling
To his past... To his love...
Took his mind
And threw it away
To the evils of science
To make a creation
That could never exist...
The flame that burned
That burned from the spark
Of none other
Than his creation
The creation that he wished
Would bring her back
Away from the words
That hurt her so...
That stole her away...
The flame that burned
The frame of her picture
As he stared at it...
In desire of her
In his life again
Not noticing
The red evil of the fire
Only to conclude the black ashes
Of him and the frame
Laying as one...
Copyright ©
Bro
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2004-03-08 00:51:27]
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Re: BLACK... RED...
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 01:33:55 AM AEST
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| ooo, very good, love your style, flow and vivid images, keep writin' hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: BLACK... RED...
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by shelby on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:11:06 AM AEST
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wonderful and very enjoyable to read it flows with great emotions
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